Sunday, November 6, 2022

The Search for a Sign - The Sunday Muse #235

 

 

The Search for a Sign

By Katherine 

 

 

She searched for a sign

A sign of hope

The pain of unjustified hurt crushed her soul

It created a shift in her psyche like nothing else ever had

The hurt seeped through her veins like a insidious disease

Freezing her blood and turning her once warm heart cold

 

This is not how she wanted to live

Sadness and desperation had taken hold

 

She said one more prayer

A prayer for a sign

As to why she should stay


In this her most darkest moment

She tightly closed her eyes

She felt something move beneath her hand

She opened her eyes

And tears began to fall


Her prayer had been answered


Image 

 

Written by KMF

for Carries The Sunday Muse photo prompt

 

16 comments:

  1. Sometimes it takes very little, and so very much umfolds. Wonderful write Katherine… ✌🏼🕊

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    1. Hi Rob, yes and its a wonderful kind of magic when it happens. thank you :-)

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  2. That tiny flutter was a visceral end to the poem. :)

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  3. Exquisitely offered on this Sunday ....

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  4. This is wonderful, reading from the narrator's viewpoint and, at the end, the impact of the little bird as a sign of hope. I do love birds.

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  5. Beautifully done, hope and prayers answered.

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  6. Sometimes our prayers are answered in the most mysterious ways.

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    1. I believe that to be true, it's happened for me that way quite a few times :)

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  7. A prayer answered in a simple yet beautiful way.

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